Review of “Whiskey Tango Foxtrot” by David Shafer

Three main characters in their mid-thirties, seemingly unconnected, become unwitting players in a control for online information. This edgy, dark but also comedic novel describes a potential dystopian state of affairs in which personal data becomes the property of large corporations, who want to use it as they wish, and sell it back to you for a price.


Leila Majnoun is an attractive American woman trying to make a difference in health care in Myanmar, when she inadvertently stumbles upon the U.S. Government involved in something she shouldn’t have seen. Leo Crane, a good-hearted but misguided and substance-abusing neer-do-well, has just lost his job as a preschool teacher in Portland, Oregon. And Mark Deveraux is a drug-addled, alcohol-addicted self-help guru in New York who has come to the attention of wealthy and powerful James Straw, the “squillionaire” of SineCo, a digital search-and-storage conglomerate.

SineCo is supported by a clandestine U.S. intelligence organization called the Central Security Service, or CSS, the mission of which, since 9/11, has been “to build and maintain the world’s supreme electronic intelligence-gathering apparatus and cyberdefense infrastructure.” The CSS uses a few private-sector endeavors for intellectual capital and leading-edge technology. In return, the CSS provides cover for the companies’ R& D “that, in order to be valuable and effective, must take place in zones unattached to a particular jurisdiction.”

With the help of the CSS, SineCo has formed “The Committee,” dedicated to privatizing any and all information found anywhere online, and putting it to their own uses. A secret counter-movement, called “Dear Diary” has also arisen to try and stop The Committee.

What Leila found in Myanmar was an operation run by The Committee. Even though she had no idea what she saw, she was curious about it, and emailed a few reporter friends with questions. This was enough for the CSS to arrange for her eviction from Myanmar.

Before leaving however, she receives a cryptic warning from Ned Swain. Ned is a CSS operative who has been a little shocked and disaffected by the increasingly nefarious direction CSS has been taking. He advises Leila to contact Dear Diary. Dear Diary is afraid that The Committee wants to do more than just influence the thought and language and culture and social order. They have seen documents indicating that The Committee is considering a “targeted genocide” program. In ten years or so, they will have collected enough biological and genetic material to have computers determine which five percent of the population should live so they can begin the world again with “Enhanced Humanity.”

With Dear Diary’s help, soon Leila connects with both Leo and Mark, and the three of them get involved in a scheme to help take down The Committee.

But Leila, Leo and Mark have to grapple with a critically important question: how do they know that Dear Diary won’t also turn into an organization like The Committee? As Mark points out, revolutionaries usually end up eating their children, or as he phrases it, “distributors always become the assholes.”

Dear Diary alleges it has a way to help keep its adherents honest, called “The Test.” All three of them take it, and it gives them a new perspective on reality, and on each other. But is it enough to save the world?

Discussion: This is one of the growing number of books in a genre that looks at the (invariably deleterious) repercussions of the proliferation of online information and diminution of privacy. It is similar in a way to Dave Eggers’ book The Circle, but this one is less allegorical. I like to wonder if it is more or less over the top than Eggers, but that’s because I like to pretend that these cautionary tales are all over the top.

There are some very funny satirical moments in this book, both subtle and overt – I especially loved the insider Proust joke. But I thought there was a bit too much rehashing of the main characters’ inner angst, and not enough development of some of the side characters, like Ned and James Straw, neither of whom I felt I really understood.

Evaluation: While this book just brushes the edges of being a thriller, I would categorize it more as political fiction, with a dark, satirical edge. Recommended for those who like to think about the possibilities for abuses of information collection and privacy.

Rating: 3.5/5

Published by Mulholland Books, an imprint of Little, Brown and Company, a division of Hachette Book Group, 2014


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4 Responses to Review of “Whiskey Tango Foxtrot” by David Shafer

  1. melreadingcorner says:

    Interesting title and plot. I’ve no idea what to make of this story; it sounds like there’s a lot of issues to think about.

  2. sandynawrot says:

    I guess I do realize there are dire implications of how much of our personal lives are shared (and are accessible even to those who aren’t our “friends”) but I’m not the least bit interested in reading about it or being indirectly lectured. I DO love the title though. Clever.

  3. BermudaOnion says:

    I love the topic of privacy because we share so much online and in public (think loyalty cards) but too much angst in a book can drive me crazy. I’ll have to think about this one.

  4. I read this one this summer and thought it was a really strong debut (I still haven’t posted my review, but will do that soon). I loved his writing style and think he had really strong character development of the main 3. I hated the ending, however! Unless, there’s a sequel, but I haven’t heard anything about one 🙂

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