Review of “The Cut” by George Pelecanos

Spero Lucas is a 29-year old Iraq war vet who has adapted his Marine training to his current lifestyle as an investigator for a criminal attorney in Washington, D.C. On the side, he has a business finding stolen property, whether legal or not, for a forty percent cut of the value. As the story begins, Lucas agrees to see what has happened with a drug shipment scheme gone bad: drug dealers are fed-exing packages to houses that are empty during the day, and then the distributors pick them up. It’s a great system, but some of the packages have gone missing before the pick-ups have been made.

When not occupied with work, Lucas is very focused on his family. He is part of a blended family of natural and adopted siblings headed by Greek parents. The much-loved father is now dead, however, and two of the siblings are out of touch. He, his black brother Leo, and his mother remain very close. But he “visits” his father frequently in the graveyard. He also visits with fellow vets, and contributes to their care. He eats a lot, and walks and bikes a lot, and works out in his apartment, especially when he can’t obtain a sex partner with whom to work off his energy:

As he often did after a good ride, he wanted a woman. Instead he did several sets of push-ups, normal and wide stance, and then did chin-ups and pull-ups on a bar mounted inside the door frame of his bedroom.”

But generally, he is pretty successful at finding women, and sometimes, they just show up unbidden at his door.

The main tool of his trade is his iPhone (one wonders how this will seem to readers in ten years), but when necessary, he has access to and skill with a number of lethal weapons.

His status as a vet enables Pelecanos to incorporate a plot line about problems faced by those who served in Iraq, including the let-down of quotidian life compared to the constant adrenaline rush of battle. Lucas’s flirtation in the borderlands of criminal life helps him reach the highs he felt in Iraq, for which he knows he is “lucky.”

This exhilaration is fully activated for Lucas as he chases down the stolen drugs, navigating through the dangerous shoals of D.C.’s violent underbelly of crime.

Discussion: Lucas is a Jack Reacher [of the Lee Child thriller series] who showers. He is bursting with testosterone, perfectly built, irresistible to women, trusted by black and white alike, and flexible on morality. (Killing is only done to bad guys as a means to a good end.) He is good to his mother, helps the needy with money, and respects the elderly. In short, he is a bit cartoonish.

Moreover, like Jack Reacher, we don’t know much about what goes in Lucas’s head. By contrast, we know the brands of every outfit he wears, we know every dish he orders in restaurants, and every component of his exercise routines. We also get a street-by-street map of everywhere he walks, bikes, or drives. It was all a little too much detail for me – as if Pelecanos were setting up the scenes for a screenplay rather than adding meaningful information to the story.

Women in this story are in all cases objectified: Lucas’s mother is saintly (in spite of a possible problem with alcohol), and younger women are either whores (used by bad guys) or outlets for testosterone excess (used by Lucas). Even though one of Lucas’s conquests is a lawyer and one a law student, their main function seems to be to show how irresistible Lucas is.

Evaluation: I was disappointed in this book. I loved the author’s Drama City because of the characterizations. But Spero Lucas is too cartoonish for me, and the book is written too much as if it is meant to include set directions for a movie. The role of women in Spero’s life gave me the creeps. Neverthless, some of the bloggers I consult regularly for book reading ideas, including Kathy, Julie, and Caite, all liked it very much, and I recommend checking out their reviews as well!

Rating: 3/5

Published by Reagan Arthur Books, an imprint of Little, Brown and Company, a division of Hachette Book Group, Inc., 2011

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19 Responses

  1. I have always wanted to read one of George Pelecanos’ book. Maybe not this one then. Which would you recommend as the first? Thanks!

  2. That’s too bad that you didn’t enjoy this one. I’m a bit put off that it read like he was aiming for the movies….especially when the premise sounded so promising.

  3. I can see the cartoony aspect from what you said. It’s funny to think of the iPhone as a tool dating the book in the future, lol, but actually if I read this book in the future that would probably bother me a little.

  4. This book may have felt like it was written with stage directions, but that didn’t keep me from thinking it was great! I just loved Spero!

  5. I liked this one a lot. So sorry you didn’t. I see your points though. I just don’t think they bothered me, but I do “get it.”

  6. I half fell in love with Spero too. Maybe that’s why I wasn’t as critical about the book’s faults? I simply went along for the ride and enjoyed it.

  7. Authors constantly mentioning brands and routines is my reading pet peeve.

  8. Hmmm. A Jack Reacher that showers? I likey. I read Pelecanos’ The Night Gardener awhile back and loved it. I might need to get my hands on this one.

  9. Good review as always, Jill. “A Jack Reacher who showers” is such a great description! I don’t like books in which the only role women play is to be objectified, so this one probably won’t make it to my TBR shelf.

  10. I’ve only read one George Pelacanos book before and liked it. I was thinking it’s time to try another one. I don’t think it will be this one. Your first three paragraphs and the quote told me I wouldn’t like the guy.

  11. I laughed when you mentioned that women just show up at his door unbidden. Hello! I’m here for your body! I don’t think I would like this book, and from some of the things you’ve said about it make me think it’s a pretty masculine book. Especially the part about the detailed exercise and the way Pelacanos objectifies women. I think I will pass on this one, Jill! Wonderful review, by the way!

  12. well, this sounds like something that probably wouldn’t work for me. but i appreciate your thoughts!

  13. We saw a package at the house that is empty across the street. Maybe there are drugs in it!!

  14. I’ve never read any Pelecanos but have heard such great things about him. But nothing in your discussion makes his writing sound like something I’d want to pick up and read. Definitely going to pass on this one.

  15. Funny I have some Pelecanos on the shelf and have yet to read them…I don’t have this particular one…so I think I’m good to start with a different one…given your review.

  16. I think this was the first Pelecanos I read..but not the last. Obviously I liked it …and Spero…a lot more than you…lol

  17. Well. I’m reading about my crush, Jack Reacher, right now so this may be worth a look. Maybe I won’t care what goes on in his mind ;)

  18. I’ve only read one book by him but am in no hurry to reach for others. Though I have heard good things (not about this one in particular). I can’t even imagine where technology will be in 10 years. Though it was interesting to see the switch from iphones to ipads used by the crime teams on TV.

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